Exactly...she said.
Astonishingly...he thought.
Gleefully...they sang.
Definitively...she decided.
Joyfully...he danced.
Longingly...they waited.
Commonly...she saw.
Mournfully...he watched.
Questionably...they worried.
Intriguingly...she listened.
Radically...they voiced.
Hi Lucy!
ReplyDeleteI love the repetition in this poem. It is very effective. Try to make all adverbs the same. For example, questioningly. I also wonder about "commonly" and "she" together. I know what you are trying to do. I am not sure about it at the moment.
Great beginning.